Book talk & Indie read.  “Cleaning up” your word choices:  watch 29 Words to Cut From Your Novel – Vivien Reis.  Read:  43 Words You Should Cut from Your Writing Immediately – Diana Urban

Next, you will be submitting for evaluation and feedback one of the three drafts you have written.  Choose wisely.

Work to notice unnecessary, redundant, and clumsy word choices and make better ones.

Tomorrow:  Lab time for work on Submission #1.